Do like my hate poem?

What you have here is a contemporary type poem in free form, which means no form at all other than your 4-line stanzas. The gas and kruger lines with in future years be just words as one day no one will remember freddie kruger nor will they relate gas to high prices. It would be better reading if you punctuated it, so that the reader knows where to pause for effect and how long. Other than that, I think it is quite good for a start.